I have not made any big changes to my paper this weekend. All I have done is fixed some spelling errors and worked on not overusing words. Cecily goes from being a bored school girl to not being lonely and bored anymore. All we need to do know is make sure all of our paragraphs will flow.
Here's a couple questions I need answered:
1. Is this a good way to end my paragraph?
From start to finish of the novel, marriage changed Cecily’s dull life into a much more exciting one.
2. What is a word that I could say instead of saying "boring" over and over?
I really like the way you ended your paragraph. It sums up what you have written prior to this. Also, I like how you said "from start to finish" it's sound nice and flowing.
ReplyDeleteAnd instead or saying boring you could say "dull!"
Nice work and good job writing about Cecily :)
I agree with Emily and think that the ending was really good! You could also say: unenventful, unexiting ect... You did a good job!
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